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How to Write a Band 9 IELTS Essay - IELTS Writing Lesson

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In this lesson, you can see how to write a band 9.0 IELTS essay. You'll see the techniques and thought processes which you need to get a higher IELTS writing score. Practice writing essays and getting feedback from a certified English teacher: http://bit.ly/ooe-teachers . See the full version of this lesson with text here: https://www.oxfordonlineenglish.com/write-band-9-ielts-essay . This lesson will help you: - Go through the topic for the IELTS essay to make sure you understand how to answer it. - Organize your ideas before you begin writing your IELTS essay. - Understand how to use the introduction, body and conclusion paragraphs in your IELTS essay. - Use the best sentence structure for your IELTS essay. - Learn the best practices to get a band 9 on your IELTS essay. Become an OOE member to see our newest lessons before they're available to the public, and more! /channel/UCNbeSPp8RYKmHUliYBUDizg/join SUBSCRIBE to continue improving your English! https://goo.gl/UUQW8j Become an OOE member to see our newest lessons before they're available to the public, and more! /channel/UCNbeSPp8RYKmHUliYBUDizg/join See more general English and IELTS lessons on our website: https://www.oxfordonlineenglish.com/ .

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    @veronicachemistry40685 years ago Thank you, Oli! This is super helpful! This real-time practice gives us a good example of how to manage our time well during the composing of essays. 67
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    @MinhThanhNguyenVietNam7 years ago We definitely need more videos like this, Oli. If possible, please make a series of "how to write a band 9 IELTS essay" videos which covers all types of questions in IELTS. Because it makes so much sense to me, the way you develop ideas regarding the questions. I don't think I found someone did it like this ever. My deep gratitude. Keep up the good work. ... 190
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    @faysalazeem6 years ago Best thing regarding video is, real time practice. Watching writer to struggle with framing sentences really boosts up confidence 111
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    @istudiobd98906 years ago We don’t want to jump.. we are so loving watching you struggling like us..
    Thanks & Regards
    from Bangladesh 🇧🇩
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    @fitha44744 years ago I generally don’t comment . But this is extraordinary and very real 8
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    @oladunjoyekazeemolamilekan36495 years ago Thanks, i used this strategy & my band improved from 6.0 to 7.0 in Writing... 12
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    @mightiestdvip18364 years ago U just stand as a epitome for motivating student who are giving ielts examination and your essay patten is looking pretty good and i found this very helpful 13
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    @zainnarb_36993 years ago This is incredible the approach, time management and perfection. Thanks for this 2
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    @PrinceKhan-yw2qv5 years ago For variety and avoidance of monotony, you can also use words like nexus, linkage, tie-up and association instead of "connection". 6
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    @MUmer-fn9yk5 years ago Amazing technique : Think of conclusion first then based on conclusion write your essay 23
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    @nhivuong65935 years ago I love this way of teaching. While most of the time, IELTS teachers deliver boring and lengthy about do and don’t in Writing. But S like me, forget it immediately. And I find the step planning, before writing, is most critical step and this clip demonstrated how to make this very easy to understand. Thanks a lot. ... 1
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    @abdulcader8883 years ago We need more real time essay writing like this. This helped a lot. I haven't seen any videos explaining essay writing in this channel other than this. 1
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    @stringsinaction4 years ago Undoubtedly conclusion first and then the rest of the essay based on conclusion is an expert technique. 1
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    @ssensambaabdulkarim96973 years ago i would like to get more examples , this has really helped me improve the way i paraphrase and write my body in a two paragraph way and conclude with main reason 2
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    @leopoldslikkvstamkiu87185 years ago Your given examples are definitely detailed. That's what I would love to hear more about your teaching effort. With your analytical like that, I'm definitely sure of what things should I write down with full coherence and with right grammatical usage. Recently, my friend Ben had took the exam but unfortunately, he only got 5.5 bands when his teacher didn't taught him well. Overall, his overall score is B2 upper intermediate level. ... 4
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    @dudelee11816 years ago Oh man, this guys is amazing!!! This is truly an Out Of The World experience! This can be a 9 Band essay. 22
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    @nidaali16375 years ago Unique way of teaching. Wonderful video. thanks 3
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    @abdikadirahmed58924 years ago A clear step of writing Email. A full guide to every one . I don't know how much i Appreciate your efforts. 1
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    @NamHoang-el1kk5 years ago Thank you very much OXFORD ONLINE ENGLISH. Very helpful lessons.
    Thank you Sir Oli. I enjoy your lessons a lot.
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    @sharafaltruistic71555 years ago Better task response, supporting details and examples. The way of answering question, structuring and communicating with examiner is brilliant. Thanks for your video👍🏻
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    @deepuk17054 years ago I really like this method of planning and writing. After each para, just take a minute to check your work for any changes. And the best part, plan your essay from the conclusion..superb tips and tricks...hope this works for me this time...Thank you for sharing with us ... 3
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    @pavitra.356 years ago Its very clear and a strategy that is easy to adapt on the day of the test. Thanks much. 2
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    @kastureemulay316 years ago This is a really good video. How to connect the paras and how to make the flow is very well explained. 1
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    @mindspaceinvader26066 years ago Thank you very much..I never let my students start an introduction sentence with the word "It". Very smart of you to noticed this 5
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    @abuahadbd5 years ago After watching several videos on similar topics, definitely it is one of the best, many thanks to Oli, this video will help me a lot, regards. 2
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    @lakshayarun56306 years ago Thanks Oli....this video is really helpful....pls do some more videos of same kind with other topics. 4
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    @sofiaalonso26826 years ago Thank you so much! This was extremely helpful for those lost souls studying for ielts (like me). 15
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    @ol11366 years ago Oli, you just proved me one more time that pay for "real ielts teacher " it is wasting money. I think your YouTube Chanel is more than enough. Thank you so much! Waiting for this kinda lessons! 3
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    @user-nu4ff6lm8r3 years ago it was extremely useful! thank you for your work and time! 1
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    @letslearn40396 years ago THANKS, a very helpful video indeed, very helpful watching you collecting ideas. 2
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    @quynhngadothi3827 years ago I love to hear your voice and your way you teach 1
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    @MHasan-sx1vr5 years ago Dear Oli
    If u upload more task 2 writing on different aspects like agree or disagree, give opinion, advantage or disadvantage etc, then it will be a great pleasure to us.
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    @stephenmichael30556 years ago It is a very good lesson on developing an IELTS essay topic while addressing all the marking criteria perfectly. Thanks for the video. 2
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    @spiderlinux7 years ago Starting from an abstract idea making a ordered concept of the understanding, however I have clear when sometimes you have so limited time so improvise is needed, so breaking down the initial topic to get a correct answer, pretty awesome guys, thanks a lot and hi from México. ... 18
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    @ttluk53705 years ago Thanks for sharing. It’s extremely useful for us to prepare IELTS exam. 1
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    @rociofrassi50742 years ago Thanks a lot!! you crafted a really useful resource. Invest the time to practicing a good essay technic is whole crucial. I stumbled upon it!!
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    @nutrition_with_ines5602 years ago Thank you oli this video helped me a lot 1
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    @thilenapham1405 years ago Very useful. Hope u will make more videos about this 1
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    @prawashasingh92425 years ago thank you for the lesson this is so helpful . 1
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    @sherifshawky82396 years ago We need more videos to learn the techniques and Know how. 1
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    @afroozshahana46516 years ago Thank you Oli.. Well explained essay. You increased my confidence. Hoping to see more essay types. 3
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    @angelangel68324 years ago Thank you sir, for this real time practice of essay. Its the best way of writing the essay by focusing first on conclusion and then direct the whole essay directing or basis of it. I appreciate this video and your help a lot. ...
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    @edu-notchdr.tameralmekky9776 years ago Really to the point. Really appreciated! 1
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    @sharftube20124 years ago Absolutely it is a very good essay. Much appreciated your work. Please keep going.
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    @sabiankitty36634 years ago Writing in real time. Very helpful~ Thanks
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    @ParamjeetKaur-vn8kf5 years ago It is really very helpful please make more videos sir😊 2
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    @sebastianbarton27906 years ago nice video! appreciate it! Btw, what's the noise when u typing? 1
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    @zafarzubair2743last year Dear boy..... this video is quite helpful for acdemic students. Tank you.
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    @911mirza6 years ago Great channel .....please upload a discussion essay too.
    thanks in advance.
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    @KamalAsasi4 years ago An effective method for boosting score in the writing module. Thanks for your remarkable work. I am looking forward to watching more videos about IELTS. Best. 1
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    @EngChinese6 years ago Thanks
    Oxford Online English!!!
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    @daphned24647 years ago Thanks for sharing this practical video especially for those who are preparing IELTS exam. The elaboration of writing an essey is very useful and  systematic, from the plan, construction, word choice to time control and checking. ... 7
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    @form764 years ago Thank you for this fabulous approach 🙏👌
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    @pratik619prasad6 years ago to be really honest...i just saw this video..its really wonderful......and the moment i saw the question i paused it and started writing myself to it...i wrote about 332 words explaining the benefits and pitfalls of the digital technology with some made up personal examples ...also i laid a little emphasis on the huge impact it has on today's young generation....did i do good or not?...... ... 2
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    @twrsnp57196 years ago Thanks for nice video. It help and guide me to write the essay : ) 1
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    @diplalsah95545 years ago Thank u very much to u for wonderful instruction and this is really helpful for me 1
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    @kristinasimon43814 years ago Will look forward for such vedioes god bless u have a wonderful day
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    @raviYT19806 years ago Good video and amazing work done. Thanks 1
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    @moazabuobida94335 years ago Oli you are the best man, I really love your videos. they are very useful and helpful ♥.
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    @fabiofreitas10826 years ago Hi buddy. It's the best tips about IELTS exam that I have seen. Nice, very nice.
    God bless you.
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    @kristinasimon43814 years ago Loved it perfect to the point thank u my dear friend
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    @deekafs19265 years ago Thank you Oli!! the essay demanded examples from knowledge or experience but I feel you didn't touch on that in your composition. or am I overthinking? 1
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    @preet70746 years ago Awsm video.... Great efforts , well explained nd vry hlpfl 1
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    @HadushGHagos6 years ago This helped me out a lot! Thanks so much for your great presentation. I am taking the test in 2 wks time. Wish me luck 3
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    @yancnaky49263 years ago I think this video is a great help. Thank you! Though I have a question. As a matter of fact, you can see people's body language and facial expressions through video chat. The essay doesn't say why video chat is no substitute for face-to-face communication. ... 1
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    @rishithadhanyasi40753 years ago I found it very useful....thank you so much ❤️
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    @dhritikadeka28706 years ago Hello sir, your IELTS videos are helping for preparing TOEFL, as both the exams are quite similar. Thank you. 2
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    @soniamahey72034 years ago Please make more videos on IELTS writing task-II 🙏 1
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    @yi22704 years ago Thank you for making this video! This video structure is very helpful and informative.
    And what I found most interesting in this video is, despite this channel being "Oxford Online English," you do not use the oxford comma :) ...
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    @user-tq9ud2ob9e4 years ago Starting from conclusion, good strategy! 1
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    @sanyinmon6 years ago Hi,Oli,
    Can I use "which" instead of repeating true communication in the last sentence of body paragraph 2?
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    @bayjidbostami79976 years ago l listen to youtube video of you and I am inspired by it and a question why I am being it as your voice is more clear to me , my request to give more ielts videos as you give more on English. 1
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    @amandeeppannu73146 years ago Thnku sir its very useful for perons like mee 😍😍 2
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    @bestserviceinternational82076 years ago I'm really grateful ,,thank u so much 1
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    @ankitdhingra66236 years ago Very well explained... I was thinking that a synonym we can use for communicate could be 'interact'. 1